Dear Adam and All
Agree with the 'children issues'.
Ubonrat
----- Original Message -----
From: "Adam Peake" <ajp@glocom.ac.jp>
To: <communication@wsisasia.org>
Sent: Monday, January 27, 2003 12:17 AM
Subject: [communication 408] Our Tokyo declaration
> I have a couple of minor issues:
>
> Missing from the numbered list - children and exploitation of
> children. A millennium goal issue, and one particularly important to
> our region.
>
> And some comments on items in the numbered list.
>
> 2. delete "and other stakeholders." govt. private sector and civil
> society should be all, no more than us three.
>
> 13. Delete "never" and replace with not. Delete "any kind of".
> This is too definite.
>
> I'd like to re-write the preamble, but am only getting to this now
> (late on Sunday) Will try if I can find some time.
>
> Adam
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