I have a couple of minor issues:
Missing from the numbered list - children and exploitation of
children. A millennium goal issue, and one particularly important to
our region.
And some comments on items in the numbered list.
2. delete "and other stakeholders." govt. private sector and civil
society should be all, no more than us three.
13. Delete "never" and replace with not. Delete "any kind of".
This is too definite.
I'd like to re-write the preamble, but am only getting to this now
(late on Sunday) Will try if I can find some time.
Adam
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